But seriously, I was almost done with this picture, then I went and made a stupid mistake and had to redo it from scratch.
But at least. At long last it's done. And I just sent it to the Art Gallery so I really hope it will get chosen.
(Since I sent this to the Art Gallery it is signed with my Neopets username rather than my usual signature. Just clearing that up so there's no confusion)
No soy experto en Neopets, me encantan pero no sé mucho acerca de sus habilidades y de sus tipos. La escena es sensacional. El dragón englobando todo el marco da sensación de profundidad, su colorido está muy bien conseguido aunque demasiados vivos los colores. El mini ejército está hecho con maestría, la que te caracteriza. El mago, el guerrero, el espadachín y el arquero. Todos ellos me encantan. El sombreado también muy logrado. Es mi primera crítica y un honor hacerla a una de mis artistas preferidas. Continúa así de bien. Ya vi que tu nick en Neopets es Zorro_Plateado jeje.
First off, I want to say that, never having actually seen much official Neopets artwork, the technique here is really well handled. The characters don't look like they could have been drawn any better, and the shading is spot on.
Being as it's a fanart though, I wasn't sure how to handle the originality category. But the characters' exressions added a sense of originality that is completely your own.
The only suggestions I could make is that, while all the other characters are entirely in frame, the cat wizard dude is slipping out a bit. It might have been better to exand the picture a bit so that the whole character could fit in. (As opposed to moving all the characters up higher, which would have made it look a tiny bit cramped.)
La escena es sensacional. El dragón englobando todo el marco da sensación de profundidad, su colorido está muy bien conseguido aunque demasiados vivos los colores.
El mini ejército está hecho con maestría, la que te caracteriza. El mago, el guerrero, el espadachín y el arquero. Todos ellos me encantan.
El sombreado también muy logrado.
Es mi primera crítica
Continúa así de bien.
Ya vi que tu nick en Neopets es Zorro_Plateado jeje.
The characters don't look like they could have been drawn any better, and the shading is spot on.
Being as it's a fanart though, I wasn't sure how to handle the originality category.
But the characters' exressions added a sense of originality that is completely your own.
The only suggestions I could make is that, while all the other characters are entirely in frame, the cat wizard dude is slipping out a bit.
It might have been better to exand the picture a bit so that the whole character could fit in.
(As opposed to moving all the characters up higher, which would have made it look a tiny bit cramped.)
Anyway, that's about it.
Fantastic work, overall!
Hope you don't mind my nit-picking
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